Monday, March 30, 2020

Class Schedule for April


1984 Reading and Class Schedule

3/31     Zoom Class at 11 am
            Overview of Month and work


4/1     1984 Part 1 chapter 1
            Flipgrid Response #1
            PERSUASIVE ESSAYS FINAL DRAFT DUE

4/2     Zoom Class at 10am
            Part 1 chapter 2-4
            Flipgrid Response #2

4/3     Part 1 chapter 5-6
            Flipgrid Response #3

4/6     Part 1 chapter 7-8
           
4/7     Zoom Class at 10 am
            Overview discussion of PART 1      
Blog Post #1 (PART 1)

4/8     Part 2 chapters 1-2
            Flipgrid Response #4

4/9     Zoom Class at 10 am
            QUIZ on PART 1

4/10   Part 2 chapters 3-5
            Flipgrid Response #5

4/13   Part 2 chapters 6-7
            Flipgrid Response #6

4/14   Zoom Class at 10 am
            Part 2 chapters 8

4/15  Part 2 chapters 9-10

4/16   Zoom Class at 10am
            Overview Discussion of PART 2


4/17   BLOG #2 (PART 2)
           

4/20   QUIZ Part 2
           

4/21   Zoom Class at 10 am
            Part 3 chapters 1-2
           
4/22   Part 3 chapters 3
           
4/23   Zoom Class at 10am
           
4/24   Part 3 chapters 4
            Flipgrid Response #7

4/27   Part 3 chapter 5
           
4/28   Zoom Class at 10am
           

4/29   Part 3 chapter 5
            Flipgrid Response #8

4/30   Zoom Class at 10am
            Overview of PART 3

5/1     Finish Novel
            Blog Post #3


OBJECTIVES:

At the end of this book students will be able to

1) Define Negative Utopia and discuss how 1984 fits the definition.
2) Define motif, give 3-5 examples of motifs in the book and be able to explain their significance (a few motifs to think about include rebellion, songs, slogans, sex, rebellion)
3) Be able to explain the significance of the following themes:  The meaning of freedom; The responsibility of the Individual in Society, Dehumanization as a method of control, isolation, social class disparity, and the abuse of power
4) Define dystopia and apply it to the novel
5) Keep a list of ironies (at least ten found in the book)
6) Make a list of all the characters with description and discussion of the meaning behind their names
7) Examine the following symbols: Big Brother, The Party Slogans, The Four Ministries, the paperweight, the golden country, Emmanuel Goldstein, James, Aaronson, Rutherford, Chestnut Tree Café, Doublethink, Newspeak Dictionary, Winston’s Diary, Junkshop, songs, Proles
8) Explain the purpose of Newspeak
9) Describe how Big Brother controls its citizens
10) Describe the setting
11) Name the four ministries and what they control
12) Compare/Contrast Winston and Julia
13) Research current privacy-related issues and debates affection society and connect with 1984.
14) Keep a list of Newspeak Words
15) Discuss the meaning of room 101.
16) List the ideas in Goldstein’s book.
17) Outline the plot according to the six elements of plot
18) Discuss the three movements in the book and summarize what happens in each.
19) List the types of conflict involved in the novel.
20) Discuss the meaning of various quotes discussed in class.
21) List five to ten examples of foreshadow.
22) Answer study questions are you read.  

Unit Learning goal
Students will demonstrate an understanding of one or more themes from 1984 by creating a video/performance overview of the novel, which focuses on how that theme works; the video/performance will also include a discussion of why the theme is important. 

Example of a student project:

CRASH COURSE:


COURSE HERO:


Monday, March 16, 2020

Welcome to ONLINE Learning with Mr. Fielding


INSTRUCTIONS FOR THE WEEK:

 


What I need you to do this week is work on your persuasive essays.  Please send these to me through google docs and resend when you want comments.   You can also text me through remind if you need help.  Further, if you want credit for your debates, please film yourself delivering your constructive and either post it on your blog or send it to me through remind.  You can film yourself using "Photo Booth" (just click on "insert video" and drag the video into blogger) or any other app.  Lastly, I have an EDPUZZLE for you to do regarding logos, ethos, pathos and types of evidence.  The assignment can be accessed below, on Edpuzzle, or via link below the video:




or you can get to Edpuzzle via this link: https://edpuzzle.com/assignments/5e6fb2dec80ee23edef597ad/watch

If you want to review notes on Logos, Ethos, and Pathos please look at the following link to google slides.  
(Click on link below)
Link to Notes on Persuasion

Remember the six steps in the writing process.  You are on revising - this means revising ideas, claimis, arguments, and structure to improve the quality of your essay.  Editing is step 5.  Editing is looking at grammar and spelling issues.




ASSIGNMENTS: Participate in a Debate Tournament, Watch a National High School Debate and keep a flow chart, create 10 MLA citations and source cards, write a persuasive speech and deliver it as an oration. 


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Not Evident
Thesis Statement, Ideas, Defining your argument
Ideas are fresh and original.  Thesis is narrow and manageable. Order of development clear and precise and helps development one clear main idea.  Hook and thesis connect.   Clear important details for support
Ideas are clear but might be overused.  Topic/ Thesis is fairly board.  Order of develop may ramble and may not back up thesis.  Hook is present but may not connect with thesis.  Support is attempted but not quite fulfilled with specifics. 
Paper lacks a central idea or purpose.  Ideas are not developed or seem to go in several directions.  Information is limited or unclear.  Details are missing.
Not Evident
Organization
Original title.
Transitions connect main ideas. Effective opening and ending.  Easy to follow.  Important ideas stand out.  Clear beginning, middle and end.  Details fit where placed.
Appropriate title.  Transitions connect sentence to sentence but not necessary idea to idea.  Good beginning.  Attempted ending.  Logical sequencing.  Key ideas are beginning to surface.  Readable.
Paper is hard to follow because transitions are weak or absent.  There is no clear beginning or ending.  Ideas may not fit together or ramble.  Paragraph structure might not be evident. 
Not Evident
Voice
Point of view is evident
Clear sense of audience
Enthusiastic about topic.  Says more than is expected.  Words elicit both ideas and emotions.  Work is engaging and persuades 

Personal treatment of standard topic.  Perspective becomes evident.  Some sense of audience.  Conveys ideas to reader.  The writer likes the topic, but is not passionate about it.  Writing persuades in some places
Paper is lifeless, mechanic, stilted.  Predictable treatment of topic.  Energy lacking.  Audience could be anyone.  Writer is indifferent to the topic.  Does not persuade at all.
Not evident
Word Choice
Precise, fresh, original words.  Vivid images.  Avoids repetitions, clichés, and vagueness.  Use of figurative language.  Everyday words are used well.
Uses favorite words correctly.  Experiments with new words.  Attempts to use descriptive words to create images. 
Ordinary and recognizable words.  Language is generic or cliché.  Uses repetitions or relies on slang.  Overuse of “to be” verbs.
Not Evident
Sentence Fluency
Consistent use of sentence variety.  Sentence structure is correct and creative.  Varied beginnings, varied structures, and varied lengths.  Natural flow and rhythm.  Writing is not wordy. Rhetorical strategies such as parallelism used effectively.
Sentences are usually correct, but some may not flow smoothly.  Simple and compound sentences are present.  Varied beginning.  Sections have rhythm and flow.  Writing could be cut to avoid wordiness. Rhetorical strategies such as parallelism attempted.

Sentences are choppy, incomplete, rambling or awkward.  Meanings are not always clear.  Words are strung together.  Sentences could be extremely wordy.
Not Evident
Mechanics
There may be occasional errors in mechanics (spelling, fragments, run-ons, punctuation, capitalization, usage, etc.).  However, it is hard to find errors.
Errors in writing mechanics are noticeable but do not impair readability.
Numerous errors in usage, grammar, spelling, capitalization, and/or punctuation distract reader and impair readability.
Not Evident
Uses of Persuasive Tools/Evidence


Expert Testimony







Personal Connection










Statistics, Facts, and Logic










Counter Argument (Counter claims)
















Audience Self-Interest



Essay cites at least two experts in a field related to the topic.  Evidence is relevant to thesis.  Analysis makes clear how the evidence connects to the thesis.  (Ethos and Logos)


Student uses personal experience to connect to the topic (ethos).  Experience is relevant and analyzed in relation to the topic.








Student uses statistics, facts, and logical argumentation in essay.  The evidence is relevant to the thesis.  Analysis makes clear how the evidence connects and defends the thesis. (Logos)








Student has at least two counter arguments that refutes or contends an argument of the opposition, or concedes a point.  The counterarguments are relevant, analyzed and connect evidence with thesis.
(Logos and Ethos)











Student uses HARMS and BENEFITS of adopting his/her position to influence audience self-interest (Pathos).  The harms/benefits are relevant and reinforce the thesis.



Essay cites at least two experts.  Evidence is relevant to thesis.  The analysis makes some connections between evidence and thesis.


Student uses personal experience relevant to the topic.  Experience offers some insight into the topic and position of the writer.








Student uses statistics and/or facts and/or logical argumentation in the essay.  The evidence is relevant to the thesis.  The analysis makes some connections between evidence and thesis.








Student has at least one counter argument that refutes or concedes an argument of the opposition.  The counterargument is relevant, and analyze.













Student uses HARMS or BENEFITS of adopting his/her or her position to influence audience self-interest.  The harm or benefit is relevant and might connect to the thesis.



Essay cites at least one expert.  Evidence might not be relevant to thesis.  No analysis or no connection made between evidence and thesis



Student attempts to use personal connection.  Connection may not be relevant to the topic.








Student attempts to use statistics and/or facts.  Evidence may not be relevant to thesis or the analysis is confusing or oversimplified.









Student attempts a counter argument.  The counter argument might not be relevant to the thesis or the analysis might be confusing or oversimplified.












Student attempts to use HARMS or BENEFITS to influence audience.  The harm or benefit might not be relevant or the analysis might be confusing or oversimplified.






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Not Evident






Not Evident











Not Evident











Not Evident
















Not Evident
References and Sources
More than five sources.  All sources of information are noted in correct in-text citation (MLA format) and correct Works Cited page. 
Three to five sources. Some sources of information are noted incorrectly or not in MLA format.  Minor problems with Works Cited page.
Less than three sources.  Most information noted incorrectly.  MLA format completely missing.  Many problems with Works Cited page.
Not Evident

Objectives (smaller chunks of overall goal) and suggested time periods

OBJECTIVES:  By the end of this unit students will be able to
1)    Define the following terms: Logos, Ethos, Pathos, Thesis Statement, Order of Development, Conclusion, Transition, Audience, Hook, Purpose, Evidence
2)    List the six traits of writing and the six steps in the writing process.
3)    Properly outline the constructive for a debate and rebut opponents points/arguments
4)    Participate in Spar and Forum debate
5)    Watch a national debate and evaluate and explain who won by keeping a flow chart of arguments and rebuttals
6)    Choose a topic about a controversial issues and take one side of argument
7)    List the Do’s and Don’ts of persuasive argument
8)    Write a clear and precise thesis statement with an order of development
9)    Properly cite sources both in-text and on a works cited page
10) Find evidence from a variety of different sources including Print Sources, Internet Sources, Media Sources, and Personal Sources
11) Use the Internet to properly to conduct research 
12) Create at least 10 Bibliography citations and 10 research entries
13) Use research notes to cite passages from sources
14) Use evidence to back up your position
15) Use your order of development as an organizational tool
16) Use transitions to connect points of argument
17) Use Standard Edited American English
18) Use Proper College Composition Format
19) Use the six steps of the writing process to draft and revise a paper
20) Write three drafts of a persuasive essay using at least three sources of evidence
21) Present the final draft of your essay as an oration to class


Monday, March 9, 2020

Debates!!!!

Today we are going to discuss debates and flowing.   Remember, in debates, claims (or contensions),  warrants, evidence, and impacts. 

Remember your unit objectives:
OBJECTIVES:  By the end of this unit students will be able to

1)    Define the following terms: Logos, Ethos, Pathos, Thesis Statement, Order of Development, Conclusion, Transition, Audience, Hook, Purpose, Evidence
2)    List the six traits of writing and the six steps in the writing process.
3)    Properly outline the constructive for a debate and rebut opponents points/arguments
4)    Participate in Spar and Forum debate
5)    Watch a national debate and evaluate and explain who won by keeping a flow chart of arguments and rebuttals
6)    Choose a topic about a controversial issues and take one side of argument
7)    List the Do’s and Don’ts of persuasive argument
8)    Write a clear and precise thesis statement with an order of development
9)    Properly cite sources both in-text and on a works cited page
10) Find evidence from a variety of different sources including Print Sources, Internet Sources, Media Sources, and Personal Sources
11) Use the Internet to properly to conduct research 
12) Create at least 10 Bibliography citations and 10 research entries
13) Use research notes to cite passages from sources
14) Use evidence to back up your position
15) Use your order of development as an organizational tool
16) Use transitions to connect points of argument
17) Use Standard Edited American English
18) Use Proper College Composition Format
19) Use the six steps of the writing process to draft and revise a paper
20) Write three drafts of a persuasive essay using at least three sources of evidence
21) Present the final draft of your essay as an oration to class












Wednesday, March 4, 2020

Wednesday

As you write/research your topic, I want you to create at least 10 bibliography cards/sources.  These can be on your blog.  You will need to cite the source in proper MLA format:

See https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/research_and_citation/mla_style/mla_formatting_and_style_guide/mla_formatting_and_style_guide.html

and then give a brief summay or the information/article/source


EXAMPLE: 

Lefkowitz, Arthur S. Benediction Arnold in the Company of Heroes.  California: Savas Beatie, 2012.

Lefokowitz book explores the extordinary lives of those individuals who made 1775 expeditation through Maine and into Canadian wilderness before attacking Quebue.  Some of these heroes including Aaron Burr, who would later kill Alexander Hamilton in a duel, and Daniel Morgan the future hero of the Battle of Cowpens. 




Fielding, Kent. Chief Iffucan. Louisville: Wasteland Press, 2002.

Friday

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